Jaane kyon man vichalit hai,
Kyon vicharon ka ufan aata hai,
Jab shant hai vatavaran saara,
Toh kyon man mein tufan aata hai?
Ek ladi si lag jaati hai khayaalon ki,
Jinka na aapas mein naata hai,
Samajhne ka karoon kitna bhi prayaas,
Kintu samajh mein kuch na aata hai.
Mrigtrishna si tadap hai ab,
Yeh baat kyonki jaanti hoon,
Who saare uttar bhi toh mere hi paas hain,
Jinke peeche anaayas hi bhaagti hoon…
Kyon vicharon ka ufan aata hai,
Jab shant hai vatavaran saara,
Toh kyon man mein tufan aata hai?
Ek ladi si lag jaati hai khayaalon ki,
Jinka na aapas mein naata hai,
Samajhne ka karoon kitna bhi prayaas,
Kintu samajh mein kuch na aata hai.
Mrigtrishna si tadap hai ab,
Yeh baat kyonki jaanti hoon,
Who saare uttar bhi toh mere hi paas hain,
Jinke peeche anaayas hi bhaagti hoon…
22 comments:
Huh? You write poetry too? Damn good!
@ DJ,
Huh? You didn't know that?
chk out these
http://anksy06.blogspot.com/2005/12/sun-in-her-palm_21.html
http://anksy06.blogspot.com/2005/12/happy-new-year.html
http://anksy06.blogspot.com/2005/12/foodie-says.html
"Woh saare uttar bhi mere paas hain
jinke pichhe anayas hi bhagti hoon"
Well said.
Beautiful one.
But I think there are mistakes -
Shant and Mrigtrishna.
Oh yes, I read your poems in English but if I'm not it's first poem I'm reading in Hindi. Keep it up.
Kya technical answer diya hai :| I meant poems in Hindi only, which I think Juneli is right ... it's the first here.
Wah! wah! Very nice ...Read your other poems also whose links you have given above. All are beautiful. This one I liked the best - http://anksy06.blogspot.com/2005/12/sun-in-her-palm_21.html
Finally I have been able to post the tag....
:) good...liked it
Bahut hee achee kavita likhi hain aapne. Mere Hindi itni achee nahin hain par iss Mrigtrishna ke tadap samajh main aa gayee. Ek shabd samjh main nahin aaya, ufan?
@ Juneli,
Shant i agree was an oversight but in the software i used to type in hindi, i couldn't get mriftrishna correctly...
this is not the first Hindi poem i wrote, but the first one i posted!
@ DJ,
ab technical toh hoon hi,... its part of my genes!
but yes, you are both right... it is definitely a first here...
@ navy,
yeah, the sun in the palm is my fav one too...
thanks for liking all the poems :)
@ juneli,
read it... will comment too
@ preeti,
thanks :)
@ ricky,
Ufaan is the character of a tidal wave... that tises high and suddenly....
tises = rises!
tises = rises!
Interesting coz I am reading Amitav Ghosh's, "Hungry Tide" and its all about these high and mighty tidal waves of Sundarbans...
Ankita,
This was wonderful...
हाँ, तो अब प्रकाशित हो रहे हैं, कवियित्री की भावनाएँ ।
भावप्रकाश सुंदर है, लिखती रहो ।
@ ricky,
oh... is it fiction? i haven't read him at all...
@ Vijay,
thank you ji...
@ Prem,
Shukriya... :)
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