Thursday, June 11, 2009

कयूँ खुशी नही रहती


ज़िंदगी की गलियों में अकेले घूमते हम
ज़ेहन में उठते सवालों का जवाब ढूंडते हम
सँग चलते हैं इतनों के
फिर भी तन्हा ही रेहते हम

खुशी के पल आते हैं
और चले जाते हैं
फुलझडी सी रौशनी कर के
दोबारा अंधेरा छोड जाते हैं

कयूँ नही रोज़ रोज़ रहता
वो खुशी वाला समाँ
कयूँ नहीं उदासी आते ही
रुख कर लेती कहीं और का

क्या ये हमारी फ़ितरत है
या दुनिया का दस्तूर
हम ही ऐसे जीते हैं
या सभी इतने मजबूर

Something i wrote long back... just found it while deleting old stuff from my comp...


18 comments:

Sneha said...

Behot hee achcha likha hai.:)

Aniket said...

Leaves one wondering. Has great depth in those words...

Bhagyalaxmi said...

My exact thoughts for the past couple of days. :)

Brajmohan Kumar said...

inspiring one raising few valid questions about life. :)

Anki said...

nice...
i haven't been my 'wondering' self for the last few days. Somehow this brought back the time when i used to wonder about life

Adisha said...

Kya baat hai ?! Very nicely written. Sawaalon me khoye har insaan ke liye .... :)

Mahesh Sindbandge said...

I simply loved the feelings that are being potrayed in the words of your poem..

i liked 2nd and 3rd stanza very much..

In the first, i found the present/past tense is missing...

for example...

rehte hai him or rehte rahe hum
dhoondhte hai hum or dhoondhte rahe hum..

Over all..good one...

Cheers

Ricky said...

"...फुलझडी सी रौशनी कर के
दोबारा अंधेरा छोड जाते हैं..."

This is an absolute beautiful line :-)

I think this is the first Hindi poetry that have read on your blog. Its pretty damn good.

anks said...

@ Sneha,

Hey, welcome to the blog... :) and thanks...

anks said...

@ Aniket,

So what exactly are you wondering???

anks said...

@ Bhagya,

Really? What happened???

anks said...

@ Brajmohan,

Welcome to you too.... thanks for liking it.... unfortunately I have no answers... do you?

anks said...

@ Anki,

Let me guess - no time in between chores and work???

anks said...

@ Adisha,

Haan, sawaalon mein kabhi na kabhi sabhi kho jaate hain....

anks said...

@ Mahesh,

Thanks.... and valid point about the tense. I think that would be a tad better composition...

Anonymous said...

yups! kyon khushi nahi rehti??? :D

Moonie

Anonymous said...

Btw, I like your blog background, interesting flowers with buttons! the whole look is sweet

Moonie

anks said...

@ Moonie,

everyone is asking the qestion... koi answer toh de!

Thanks for liking the template... :)